Primeval Drabble: I Told You So

[nietie]

Title: I Told You So
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Genre: gen
Challenge: monthly challenge at primeval_denial, although I didn't manage the minimum of 500 words
Characters: Connor, Tom, Duncan
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money made. Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures
Author Notes: a drabble, inspired my the February prompt “Nobody who says, ‘I told you so’ has ever been, or will ever be, a hero.” - Ursula K Le Guin.
Set in S01E04.

"

Just how stupid do you think we are, Conn? Space-time anomalies? Dinosaurs? It sounds like someone's been overdoing the Playstation."

"I can prove it. Only I'm not allowed. But one day I can say" I told you so.".

Tom and Duncan thought their friend had lost it.

…

"Now you can say "I told you so", Tom said, dying in Connor's arms. "The aliens tried to take me over. But I fought them."

"You did a really good job."

"Am I a hero?"

"Definitely, Tom."

"You are too, Conn, despite saying "I told you so." Save the world."

"I promise."

Comments

[goldarrow.livejournal.com]

*sniffles*

As much as I despised Tom and Duncan for the way they treated Connor, I really did tear up at that scene.

Well done.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Indeed, Tom and Duncan didn't treat Connor very well, but nobody deserves to die lie this. Poor boys, bless them.

[fififolle]

Aw, poor Connor. Classic use for the prompt.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Bless him and bless poor Tom.

Thank you!

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

Very touching *sniffles discreetly*
Great drabble! ^_^

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Thank you!
I was not completely pleased with it, but at least I was able to write a drabble for the challenge.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Poor Connor, even if Tom and Duncan were mean to him.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

They were mean to Connor. Bless them all, though.

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

I love this! Great drabble!

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Thank you!
I wasn't completely pleased with it, but at least I managed some words.

[cordeliadelayne.livejournal.com]

Poor Connor.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Bless him and bless poor Tom.

[tli.livejournal.com]

Aww! Nicely done.

[fredbassett.livejournal.com]

Aw, that's really sad! *sniffs*